Thursday, January 1, 2009

Fear

He stands alone, in a corner hoping that he is seen by none. Praying for his loneliness, for something inside him had died. A dream killed it, a dream that he saw with open eyes without believing it could die. But it did and it killed him too. He heard a sound, did somebody see him? It cries, his heart. Where did the king go? The one that ruled himself. The one that feared no man but himself. And now he looks at misery and it grows for he never stops dreaming, he only stops believing. At the sky he stares, he needs to fly. "Its all mine yet not my". The mighty man challenged him for a fight for he wanted to laugh, laugh at the already defeated, the timid. And then it happened, the defeated saw another dream, he saw hope, saw life. A defeat had taken his soul but this time he could do anything to be defeated, to loose, to feel the mud. Because this defeat would give him life. So he entered the ring. This time not scared but light... he knew he was going to live again, to laugh with friends, to tell his girl that he was a man, to teach kids the lessons of life. Just a defeat he knew. So happy was his heart, so strong were his senses, so angry was his soul that it fought like a champion. And there he stood, with the challenger on his legs. The emotion he could not describe, a man was born again. And he stood there lookin at the sky.

"No matter its high but this time its my"



BhArTa(inspired)

5 comments:

  1. I feel Honored to be the first one to comment on thy blog... :-P

    Quote, At the sky he stares, he needs to fly. "Its all mine yet not my" Unqoute


    Sometime later...
    Qoute, a man was born again. And he stood there lookin at the sky.

    "No matter its high but this time its my" Unqoute

    Awesome post... poetic, i would say, but makes loads of sense...
    Its like the Chaos theory... makes different sense when you look at it from some other angle (Courtesy... Bingo! Mad Angles! :P )

    Keep Posting! You've earned yourself a die-hard follower dude! U Rock! :)

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  2. Too good! I liked d message conveyed by ur poem... "No matter its high, but this time its my" Lovely Line... :) Dinky Di

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  3. Thank u so much.... here comes another one...

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  4. trust me, this guy here doesnt know the difference between THEN n THAN but hes kinda pushin hard to b de gr8est blogger of all times :D
    all de bst buddy...:) keep rockin!!

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  5. : ) ohhhk anonymous.... though i dont know the difference but i fail to do mistakes.

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