I never lived before
I think i want to fly.
He is my friend
He never lets me cry
I think he wants me to win.
She is my mom
She never wants me to grow up
I think she loves me very.
They are my teachers
They never let me rest
I think they want me to be the best.
She is my lil sister
She never laughs at my dreams
I think i am her hero.
He is my brother
He never stops scolding
I think he wants me to be flawless..
She is so nice
I never know how to make her smile
I think i will keep trying..
These are my words
I have never said them before
I think i am doing ok.. : )
I actually dunno what comments to give on poems, coz frankly, i am certainly not the poetic types. I also refrain from commenting because i dont understand most of the poems, poeple write anything just to make it rhyme.
ReplyDeleteBut thats certainly not the case with THEE! i understood your poem! Very well indeed! I congratulate you for explaining your thoughts so Clearly and Cleverly! and they RHYME too! WOOHOO! CHEERS!
Nice un! :P